“How To Create Your First
Darn Good Ad…
In Just 9 Minutes.”
Let's get right to it -
Imagine you’re sitting at a lunch counter, coffee shop, or bar minding your own business.
That's right. Your ad starts with an imaginary scene inside your head. Try to see it and hear it as clearly as possible, as it might actually go down -- we're snatching copy from reality here.
Someone sits down next to you. The waiter / waitress (or bartender) says "Hi, Mr. Hardy. Gee, you look a little down today."
And Mr. Hardy replies: "Yes, I am down. You see, I…" And he goes on to describe the exact problem that what you offer… fixes.
He has just identified himself as a prospect. When you're writing an ad, you must write to prospects -- people who are in your "target area".
To get the most out of this mini-lesson, stop reading right now...
... and spend one minute (that's long enough) writing, typing, or recording -
What did Mr. Hardy said?
How exactly did he describe his problem?
What you've done that, click Go To Next Page to continue...

Otto Tromm
"I just sold my most expensive screen ever. And, it was due to HOW I sold it with copy skills. Why am I so sure: - it was to a new customer - in a country where people are known for their fondness of bargain hunting - I am sure we had the most expensive offer (competitors offer a similar size screen at a third of the price) - it was the first time that such a screen was sold from a web inquiry. Wanna know how expensive the screen was? 25,000 euro (or about 35K in US$) without shipping or installation.
So thanks guys (David and John), I just made my investment in the Simple Writing System back 3 times on this order alone."

Peter Ippolito
Inspired by what Carton teaches about "One-Two Punch Bullets" in the SWS, last week we split-test the bullets we've been using on three of our offers.
The results were wild. All 3 resulted in a statistically significant increase in sales.
Argentinian Sausage Sandwiches: 12% increase over the control
Hotel and Spa Day: 28% increase over the control
Weight Loss Treatment: 85% increase over the control
We didn't change anything else. Just the 4-5 bullets near the top of the page.
Goes to show that copy REALLY matters.
Chris Milkie
Thank you John!!

