“How To Create Your First
Darn Good Ad…
In Just 9 Minutes.”
Let's get right to it -
Imagine you’re sitting at a lunch counter, coffee shop, or bar minding your own business.
That's right. Your ad starts with an imaginary scene inside your head. Try to see it and hear it as clearly as possible, as it might actually go down -- we're snatching copy from reality here.
Someone sits down next to you. The waiter / waitress (or bartender) says "Hi, Mr. Hardy. Gee, you look a little down today."
And Mr. Hardy replies: "Yes, I am down. You see, I…" And he goes on to describe the exact problem that what you offer… fixes.
He has just identified himself as a prospect. When you're writing an ad, you must write to prospects -- people who are in your "target area".
To get the most out of this mini-lesson, stop reading right now...
... and spend one minute (that's long enough) writing, typing, or recording -
What did Mr. Hardy said?
How exactly did he describe his problem?
What you've done that, click Go To Next Page to continue...

Peter Ippolito
Inspired by what Carton teaches about "One-Two Punch Bullets" in the SWS, last week we split-test the bullets we've been using on three of our offers.
The results were wild. All 3 resulted in a statistically significant increase in sales.
Argentinian Sausage Sandwiches: 12% increase over the control
Hotel and Spa Day: 28% increase over the control
Weight Loss Treatment: 85% increase over the control
We didn't change anything else. Just the 4-5 bullets near the top of the page.
Goes to show that copy REALLY matters.

Andrew Rondeau
"Best value course I have ever purchased... overall - great course, great value for money, expert feedback - I liked the structure. I have spent thousands of dollars on "internet related" products and in the past I have been personally mentored by not one but 2 'world famous' Internet Marketers (who charge even more thousands of dollars)...and this SWS course beats everything...it is the BEST EVER investment I made. I tell you what really pisses me off - I have spent thousands of dollars being mentored by so-called 'famous household' Internet Marketers and not one of them has suggested what you have John, not one!"
Tom Wilkerson
"In the last 3 months conversions on my website have gone through the roof. Last week we had 17 sales ($300 info product) with less than 300 unique visitors to the site, which is by far the best
month we ever had in just 1 week. My data base guy is foaming at the mouth to find out why my analytics data is sending such a huge spike in conversions and my bounce rate plummeting to the bottom of the Grand Canyon. I implemented changes to my site as I was progressing within the Simple Writing System Training Program and realized after week 3 that I had all my money back. I truly can't wait to see what happens to my bank account and my list at the end of the year!"

