“How To Create Your First
Darn Good Ad…
In Just 9 Minutes.”
Let's get right to it -
Imagine you’re sitting at a lunch counter, coffee shop, or bar minding your own business.
That's right. Your ad starts with an imaginary scene inside your head. Try to see it and hear it as clearly as possible, as it might actually go down -- we're snatching copy from reality here.
Someone sits down next to you. The waiter / waitress (or bartender) says "Hi, Mr. Hardy. Gee, you look a little down today."
And Mr. Hardy replies: "Yes, I am down. You see, I…" And he goes on to describe the exact problem that what you offer… fixes.
He has just identified himself as a prospect. When you're writing an ad, you must write to prospects -- people who are in your "target area".
To get the most out of this mini-lesson, stop reading right now...
... and spend one minute (that's long enough) writing, typing, or recording -
What did Mr. Hardy said?
How exactly did he describe his problem?
What you've done that, click Go To Next Page to continue...
Jonathan Mitchell
"The Simple Writing System course was awesome... Overall, it was a great learning experience. We have closed over $29,000 in new business since completing the course. Thanks a lot."

Peter Ippolito
Inspired by what Carton teaches about "One-Two Punch Bullets" in the SWS, last week we split-test the bullets we've been using on three of our offers.
The results were wild. All 3 resulted in a statistically significant increase in sales.
Argentinian Sausage Sandwiches: 12% increase over the control
Hotel and Spa Day: 28% increase over the control
Weight Loss Treatment: 85% increase over the control
We didn't change anything else. Just the 4-5 bullets near the top of the page.
Goes to show that copy REALLY matters.

Kamron Karington
"John, I made over $25 per minute using JUST your "power words" list. Increased click-throughs by 107%, and stuffed $10,500 in my pocket while sipping my morning coffee, using your tactics to rewrite some lame headlines for a client."